Thursday, November 12, 2009

beautiful defeat

see its something she was told
never let your heart go
worlds cruel it'll consume your soul
love, its the devils deceit

so now she's alone
sisters have grown
left their home
happily ever after is growing old

love to her isn't something out of a story
for her its a hand worth holding
living in the moment, to later share the moments
a kiss as if it were stolen

beauty of the world came from the loving
so it cant be something not worth having
she feels it in her veins
seems to cry every time it rains

see its something she was told
never let your heart go
the worlds cruel it'll consume your soul
love, it the devils deceit
but sometimes there's beauty in the defeat

- rome

6 comments:

  1. i love it, this is beautiful!!
    -atiqah

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  2. defeatingly, sublimely, beautiful...

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  3. Love is something, one claims to understand, cruel thy words just hurts so deep,
    brings unbearable pain to thy souls,
    then why to blame such innocent love,
    feels so pure and untouched,
    guilt thy soul that corrupts,
    remorse thy heart that deceives
    blame thy person who misleads...

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  4. *this is beautiful omar..I have to agree to some extent w/ the nameless above..
    -Ashi

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  5. the last line is too perfect, good job !

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